Winter Evening

Snowflakes drift slowly to the ground,

Landing gently on the cold carpet of white,

Sun shines on the thick layer of smooth fluffy snow,

Black clouds wildly spread of the normally sea blue sky,

Fires crackle sending sparks flying,

Lit candles send a warm glow of light onto polished floorboards,

So easy to forget the coldness and beauty, of a winter evening.

I'm not sure about this one...can you tell me what you think...really what you ACTUALLY think...if its awful i want to know...also can you give me some topics to write about as I'm running out.

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The Break of Dawn

Sunbeams slide smoothly over the frosty grass, glittering like diamonds, freshly polished,

Spiderwebs twinkle in the light like a water droplet - a rainbow of vibrant colours,

The crisp icy sheet of thin frozen water slowly melting into the soft earthy ground,

The fresh beginning, of a cold, sunny winter day.

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This is my own writing. Though I will happily share it with you now it is my own property and must not leave this site without my permission...other than you Urxan!

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Defying Gravity

Raindrops fall endlessly on my face,

Rolling down my cheeks like a leaf falling slowly to the ground,

The wind blows effortlessly making my heart soar on the breeze,

Like a waterfalls spray, Defying gravity,

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Words are Like Daggers

This is a poem I wrote for deaddawnpoets......its also posted on there if you want to see it against some other poems.....
Here Goes...
My heart soars through an empty bubbling pit,
My mind is screaming out for help-Only It knows the solid ground at the end,
But my heart does not care,
Then suddenly my heart hits,
And in that split second before I die,
I know,
That words are like daggers.
I hope you like it.....
Oh its also copywrite..................
If you want to post it somewhere else please ask me first..and only relevant comments please.