
Snowflakes drift slowly to the ground,
Landing gently on the cold carpet of white,
Sun shines on the thick layer of smooth fluffy snow,
Black clouds wildly spread of the normally sea blue sky,
Fires crackle sending sparks flying,
Lit candles send a warm glow of light onto polished floorboards,
So easy to forget the coldness and beauty, of a winter evening.
I'm not sure about this one...can you tell me what you think...really what you ACTUALLY think...if its awful i want to know...also can you give me some topics to write about as I'm running out.
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4 comments:
It is NOT AWFUL!!! It's enchanting with hinting mysteriousness! I'm soooooooo posting it on DDP =D
gwe lee
P.S. re: ideas. angels and other mythological creatures are always good?
i like it too. it grabs the reader's imagination.
very cool poem!
pim:P
thanks kod!
opps...and pim!
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