Night falls like rain slowly but surely landing on the earth,
Darkness fills the air causing sadness to spread through thousands of minds,
Bad dreams seek into forgotten corners like a beam of sunlight filling a room,
All goodness is forgotten except for a glimmer of hope, of light,
A streak of eerie light slides over frosty grass,
It grows larger and larger until the world is filled with light,
From a smooth, smooth full moon.
What do you think of this one...could it be related to Kakepuku? No maybe not...is scary cause there's a full moon now....what do you think about this poem...good? Bad? Tell me give me tips Ideas and topics to write about.
See You
Kit De Kat
Oh and its COPYRIGHT! (exept for Urxan!)
Photo Reference:Google Images-zimmer.csufresno.edu/.../full-moon-tmax100b.jpg
8 comments:
GOOD unlss the moon was an eye I don't think it could be related to kakepuku
yeah....that wasn't the idea anyway...have you ever noticed that the moon does have dark shapes in it?
YEAH.........IVE NOTICED THAT.......WIERD..............BUT COOL.... NICE POEM.......HAPPY EASTER........PLEASE LEAVE A COMMENT ON MY BLOG............THANKS!!!
Hey kitdekat u dont think it is related to kc
no not really...but it could be i guess...i'm at my cousins now!
This is great, NOT bad. Am posting.
gwelee
wow!~ i go away for a wek and look at the comments!
That's a great poem. My favourite one of yours so far. It's quite capturing. And sorry, but I have a disease called MAJOR WRITERS BLOCK OF ANNOYING-NESS, so I can't give you any ideas.
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