Tears trickle over delicate surfaces like Ice and Iron,
For the Tears that fall are ones of hatred and anger,
Watch the Magical smile turn to a haunting frown of steel, as though mist evaporates in seconds,
For she has been betrayed,
Betrayed by truth,
Her 'Owe So Open' mind shuts with a clank.
Her eyes freeze over as they seal forever,
Never seek truth,
Un-Lock, with lies
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again please check my work, and here is a poem for u:
the clouds arose with a misty awakining, she stumbles around to find her way through, through and around the lonley world, to find the company that she seeks so bad, hope is within. but will she find it in time? it is up to destiny to decide.
please check this poem as well as the one on my blog
cheeers
I like that one...remmber. WORD BY WORD
hey again ive edited had i just need you to help me with the final touches.
another poem:
She turned so quickly to find it gone, for it was her passion, her hope, but she had to move on.
betrayed by it, she stumbled in the darkness, she couldn't find her hope, her soul vankished in the mist forever.
if ya want u can edit that as well,
but i dont reakon its that good...
cheers
(preferbly b4 7:00)
do u rekon i should post these poems on my blog!??????????
YES post them on your blog!
A for your new poem...its good just it kind of came to an ebrupt ending.
definately miss candy!!! with a bit of editing, they will be great!!
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