Wednesday, August 22, 2007

The oaken music

Smooth oak glides and flows over mountains, crevasses,
Thin varnish flows and gleams over hidden shafts,
Silken fibres guards its heart, its soul as it makes its journey,
Of the wooden secret,
The secret of the oxygen mix,
The breath of the magic,
Of the truth,
Of the music.

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

Thats a really good poem....

IM A ROOM5IAN said...

brilliant

Precious said...

Just so you know, your poems are still going up on DDP!

Miss Candy said...

i think you should touch up the last two lines, but other than that i agree with the others, stunning!

Kitty Kat said...

i see why you don't like them miss candy but they are MY favourite lines so I'm not going to change them.