Crushing,
Suffocating,
Your voice,
Humiliating,
Hiding,
Waiting,
Your eyes,
Forsaking,
In the light,
Of the dawn and dusk,
The dark,
Of the day and night,
Forever rest in peace,
The moonlight.
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your writing,
so elegant,
so flowing,
so megentic,
so peaceful.
slipping awy from my hands,
at dawn or dusk,
may the perfect writer arise to a world that isn't sure.
WOW talk about amazing kitty kat, man oh man you have got talent. why heck am i trying?
if you go to customize click new element. click slide show. keyword is room5ians, it will come up with a picture of you guys in the hoop its so funny! i deleted the slide show of my blog by the way!
wow!! thats amazing!! but i dont really see the thing between 'humiliating' and then the moonlight....are you talking about the moon, and if so, you might want to make the connection a little clearer....
um, can you also please check out my new poem, :) thanks!
I really enjoyed that poem kittykat but I also don't get the part about it being humiliating.
its good
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